Web Fiction Beta Reading Service
for BL fanfics and original web novels
An affordable beta reading service that caters to your writing style and will help gear your work towards an online audience
- Boys love stories, whether fanfiction or original, and is intended to be published online.
- Works under any of these genres: Action, Adult, Comedy, Drama, Fantasy, Horror, Martial Arts, Mature, Mystery, Psychological, Romance, School Life, Slice of Life, Supernatural, Wuxia, Xianxia, and Xuanhuan
- Works with a minimum of 1, 000 words and maximum of 50, 000 words
Works not Accepted
- Works that are not outright BL (queer-baiting)
- Fanfiction of fandoms I do not know of.
- Works under these genres: Gender Bender, Harem/Reverse Harem, Mecha, Sci-fi, Shoujo, Sports, and Tragedy | (But if the plot is interesting enough, Lizonka may make exceptions for those under these genres)
- Works with ped*philia, besti*lity, and/or fetishized dub/non-con as the main content
What You Get
A Google Docs file of your story containing comprehensive inline comments
Detailed feedback on scene construction, story structure, plot, themes, and characters
Personal suggestions (based on your writing style) on how you can improve your story
Basic corrections on grammar and punctuation mistakes
Availing these will have an additional price, which varies per word count
More elaborate “beta reading.”
I basically also work as a proofreader and editor
Summary & Tags Guide
For fanfiction intended to be posted on AO3, I will suggest tags and help you come up with a good summary that will entice people to read your story.
Separate document containing an extensive summary of the issues found in your story and how I think you could fix it, as well as my overall reaction to your story.
Lizonka has also been interviewed about her service for the Tip Line in the August 2020 issue of Envie
Get a Quote
The more words there are in your story, the more money you can save! Options for a discount appear as the word count gets higher. Discounts will be applied to base price.
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Note 2: For orders with a deadline, there will be an additional cost, which can be negotiated through email.